The English were going to America when they found a perfect place. Ever everyone thought that Jamestown sound nice. They named it after King James the sixth. They chose Jamestown because of its a abundant resources. The English also had an ocean near bye so they could have ships bring food people or resources that they were low on. They could use the water from the ocean for a lot of things like for the plants or they could boil it and give to people or animals so Jamestown is a nice peaceful place. To this day the history stays the thayer.
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that was so cool
ReplyDeleteGood job, Noah. Capitalizing the title does not mean put every word in all caps. Try this: Why Did the English Choose Jamestown to Settle? The important words are capitalized, but words like "the" and "to" are not because they aren't particularly important. You also do not want to end a sentence with a preposition. If you take "in" off the end of your title, it sounds just as good, right?
ReplyDeleteThe English were going to America when they found a perfect place...to what...to settle? What does "bey" spell? Should "People" be capitalized in the middle of a sentence? Is it a proper noun? Should you start a sentence with a conjunction, like "And?"
Fix these things, please.